I don't really know where I'm going with this one. I wrote it and all the beautiful words are being mocked by my total incapability to not rhyme. It sounds like a fucking children's song. But I'm sure I can take it and re-write it, so I shall put the words here for safekeeping.
A night of virgin solitude
Abetted by some pain
With interlocking interludes
Of tears.
It starts to rain.
I watch the droplets streak
Because they don't watch back
And sing a song that has no words.
The window starts to
Crack.
One night of sultry solitude
Stays hidden from the sun,
Amidst frenetic symphonies
The darkness
Comes undone.
Aaaand that's all I have. I tried to draw something today. It went in the bin. It was terrible.
Everything sucks at the moment :(
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cheer up. =)
ReplyDeletehave some of my poems:
dream me between your legs
thanks for the kind words. =)
ReplyDeletei'll be hopefully publishing our second book tomorrow.
i'm wading through all the poems right now, actually.
=)
you keep writing too, and don't get too frustrated.
i love stopping through and reading your stuff.
http://goo.gl/ghZyk
ReplyDeletea little something different: goo.gl/A92yr
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